Personal Narrative

I was reading through my narrative and I realized that I've been writing a lot about how I am different but I hadn't really written to much about why/ how I would bring diversity to a college campus. So I've been working on making sure that people understand what i mean when i say that i know who i am and how that facts makes me a perfect candidate for a college and the people in it. It's kind of hard to explain but i'm working on it. I guess we'll have to see what other people think of it when they read it. Who knows, I might end up writing something completely different, or the same thing but in a different way. I'm not really sure, I tend to change my writing a lot after reading through it multiple times. But I think doing so makes it the best it can be, or atleast the best i can make it given the amount of time i have to write it. And there's one line in there that i'm not sure if i want to keep or not because i don't think its really relevant but it makes it sound cool but at the same time i'm not sure if people are going to understand what i mean by it because it's kind of like, a metaphor sort of and i want it to be obvious what i'm getting at.